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Abstracts Ron Graham |
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There are two general types of abstract:
Engineers may include any or all of the following in an abstract:
Note that each of these items must be touched on briefly. The total length of a typical abstract is usually between 200 and 250 words. Some conferences, journals and trade publications even give specifications on abstract length, which must be followed scrupulously if you want to be published. The passive voice, which generally inflates a report while offering little added value, is appropriate here. The abstract should be as disinterested in tone as possible. There'll be time enough in the body of the report to assign actions to individual subjects. Sample Abstract The following was taken from a conference paper:
Kinematics, the study of the motion of bodies without regard to their masses or the forces causing their motion, has been around for centuries. The scene graph is the emergent standard hierarchcal data structure for computer modeling of three dimensional worlds, but kinematic models of machines or mechanisms that have external constraints or constraints that span interior nodes do not sit comfortably on its open-branched tree topology. Methods that have been developed to solve the kinematics of a constrained model tend to work backwards down the scene graph's branches from leaf to root, and the term "inverse kinematics" has been attached to them. The above was rewritten as follows:
The scene graph is the standard data structure for modeling three-dimensional "worlds." Kinematic models of constrained mechanisms, such as robots, are not easily represented in scene graphs because the topology of the scene graph cannot be directly mapped to an inverse kinematic solution for mechanism motion. The second is an improvement over the first in the sense that syntax is streamlined. On the other hand, though the first includes more detail than may be necessary, it follows a reviewer's comment based on the lack of knowledge of kinematics on the part of experts in scene graphs. Though the first could still be improved with some cuts, what should be cut varies with the audience. |
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